Kiro Mastubo (Shinigami)

Name: Kiro Mastubo
*Age: 200 (Looks 16)
*Gender: Male
*Squad: N/A
*Rank: N/A
*Personality: In the face of battle he is focused an nothing is able to bother him from his current objective. But when not on a mission he is always stumbling over thing or running into people or even walls if he isnt paying attention to every thing around him. But other wise he is kind to everyone an knows his own place.
*Physical Appearance: Stands at 6'0 an weighs about 180 pounds, His hair is a light blue color as his eyes are icy blue making his facial features amazing. He wears the normal shinigami clothing an shoes. Upon both of his arms he wears a black glove with white ribbons around it. Down the left side of his face is a scar given to him during a battle with a Large Hollow.
*Bio: After graduating as one of the top students he was not picked to be in a squad due to the facts he has problems paying attention to everything around him. So afterwards he would wonder around the Soul Society in wait for a squad to join.
Inner world appearance: Deep within the mountain range a large open valley could be seen. Trees are full of life that surround the valley. Within the center of the valley is a large red oak tree that stretches high within the sky. The inner being of his Zanpakuto could be seen setting upon the branch of the large oak tree looking out over the valley peacefully.

Zanpakuto

*Name: Kurai Tamashi (Dark Soul)
Zanpakuto spirit: Long black hair that goes down to the center of his back. his eyes are icy blue that seem souless. He wears a solid black suit with black shoes. Upon his face is a large scar that travel along his right cheek an stops at the corner of his lip. He stands at 6'3 an has a slender frame that makes him look as if he is a weak Zanpakuto soul.
*Sealed form: A normal looking sword with a blue ribbon around the black handle. The metal piece between the sword an handle is in the shape of a heartagram. Down the center of the blade of the sword his a red line that goes from the tip all the way down to the handle.
*Shikai: The sword splits into making a double sided blade with a slender slit inbetween both of the blades to were another sword would slide in between them making the user of the sword to lose their grip on the sword. Upon the butt of the handle is a small metal skull with a blue ribbon hanging from it mouth. Within the eyes are two red rubies that shine lovely when the light hits them just right. Along the blades on both sides are a small curve in the blade towards the bottom of it.
*Call out phrase: Split in two an rise Kurai Tamashi.
*Any abilities/techniques: Once the blade goes into its shikai mode Kiro gains more speed an strength making it seems as if he is just a streak of lightning through the air.

Bankai N/A

Inner world appearance is the appearance of the inner world, not the appearance of your character. They would remain the same there. And your shikai ability cannot be sure to shut down movement, it has to just be a chance.

What about now?

You need more detail if you plan on getting any sort of rank in the future, but for now, it's approved.

There i put more detail hash

Don't really see it, but okay. o.O