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 Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain)

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Sakaki
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PostSubject: Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain)   Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain) Icon_minitimeSun Apr 15, 2012 5:10 am

*Name: Mou Tsukomi
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*Age: 18/ 2000
*Gender: male
*Squad: 6
*Rank: Captain https://bleacheoorp.rpg-board.net/t5p200-tryouts-rp-samples-here
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Weapon(s): hakuro: A false eye that slowily absorbs spirtual pressure placed in his right eye socket used for attacks defense soul lock: Focuses his right eye on a target memorizing their spiritual pressure, memorizing it and even can track it to a small degree of knowing its general location, simular to a radar, useful if blinded, can allow be used to target one person at a time
*Personality: Calm yet sadistic
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*Physical Appearance:Strange greenish hair, some what short apprentice around 5'8, pale white skin with a tattoo around his left eye. His muscle build is bone like, green eyes and normally wearing his captains uniform

*Bio:He was born in the rukon district, while growing up he already showed signs or strong spirit power and a destructive attitude to boot a running a small gang within the rukon he was able to match the strength of a soul reaper even without a zampakto but only a 4th seat. One day after a small fight with a group from another gang group Mou headed out to the woods looking for something when he ran into a hollow, this hollow was human sized it was a vasto lordes it was completely blue and red with yellow hair, though mou didnt know about the hollows much he just assumed it was a normal hollow and since hes taken out hollows before he attacked it without a second thought, he was able to hold his own or a few minutes but was overpower easily. He was knocked back from one of the lordes attack then went for mou trying to take over his body using a ability known as take over though as it was entering his body somehow mou kept control suppressing it in his mind and soul, their souls fussed though the second this happened his left eye and par of his face started to bleed leaven a scar on his face and his eye had been slashed out his head but was replaced by the vasto lordes eye, this being prof they had fused, after that he had become more quiet and stronger.
After about 100 years he desired to become a soul reaper, he joined the academy and graduated in 4 years though in his time their he was friends with a girl named Asta though he was more or less still stubborn and cold he treated his friends better he and and a few of his others friend graduated, Asta gave him a tassel fom her zampakuto as a graduation gift he fixed it to a earring and keeps it with him all the time. He started in squad 7 4th seat right away and after many years of missions and promotions he was given the opportunity to become a captain he passed the exam and was given the rank of squad 6 captain.
Inner world appearance: A dark stone stadium, with a hole in the center, bright red flames settle at the bottom of this abyss, the entire world looks like a sacrificial alter
Zanpakutō

*Name:Kaminoikari
Zanpakutō spirit: takes the appearance of a mermaid with strange colored scales, holding a scythe like staff, bone like armor, and blinded, her personality is a calm zen like one
*Sealed form: a 2 ft blade red outlines sharp blade
*Shikai: Right arm becomes like bone armor, right side of his face grows a skull like mask, the entire right side of his body changes . His zampakuto becomes like a small sacrificial dagger, besides that not much of his appearance changes Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain) Scan0002-6
Powers cursed flames,cursed armor, Soul lock
*Call out phrase: Bow before the almighty and repent
*Any abilities/techniques: (4 maximum, any techniques not included may not be used)
cursed flames: A disfiguring colored flames that grants the user the power to curse other who touch these dark flames.The curse causes stigmas to appear on the body instead of blatantly burning them, the stigmas cause their pain receptors to rapidity activate causing great pain in the user, they will have the feeling of being burned without the actual burns. If the stigmas appear on the face it can interact with the optical nerves causing pain and temporary blindness. the blindness mainly cause the ones infected with the stigma to see themselves being burned alive showing their skin burning even though its not, this feeling would cause confusion.the final part of the cursed flames is the levels of pain hitting the same stigma more time would cause the stigmas to evolve and increase the pain to the point a person might die or faint from the pain.the flames separate into two flames purple stigma flames and raspberry burning flames

Cursed armor: bone like armor appears on the user, this protects him from attack to a certain degree. The armor fuses to the users skin becoming apart of him. the armor has regenerative powers to repair the bone like armor, this armor also gives the user a unusual ability to adsorb spiritual energy from the area so it can heal which takes time depending on the severeness of the attack and create a defense, the user will feel pain but not much depending on how deep the cut is.the armor keeps a slight repellent of spiritual attacks. (3 post for broken armor to repair )

cursed flame dragon blade: The zamapkuto when in its released form takes a sacrificial like dagger appearance the blade in a diamond shape though its main purpose is to house the cursed flame blade.Its length can vary from 2 ft, up to 10 ft in length allowing for a large range of attacks. the flames cut or creates stigmas depending on the users choice but if he choices to cut the flames cause burning sensations in the wounds it causes making them almost imposable to heal


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*Bankai name:Sensō no kaminoikari
*Bankai description: Mou grows in height by 3ft, sprouting two arms, His out appearance changes drastically. His skin turns a dark green acting like the cursed armor, his hair grows, and he looks less human
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*Any abilities/techniques:
Gain both and advanced form of the cursed flames and cursed armor.
Zen'nō no honō(Flames of the almighty): A advanced form of the cursed flames more refined, and much easier to take different shapes, like swords whips, waves, snakes etc.The flames still contain the cursed stigma but once hit the stigma attacks the nerves causing a great deal of pain to the opponent.
Sensō no shingai(war gods armor): A advanced form of the armor, instead of bone like armor appearing, the skin turns green creating a powerful shield all around the user, this also helps the soul lock ability Mou uses to fight one opponent, now he is able to target up to 3
Anbureikaburu teashi(Unbreakable limbs): The user becomes extremely flexible, almost like rubber, in his strange fighting style his body stretches and twists far past the breaking point, making almost imposable to have broken bones or similar injures like that, His max stretching range for his arms reaches around 19 ft, this is a very useful means to fight mid and close range fighting.

*Statistics

Rank -B
Hoho (speed) -5
Zanjutsu (Art of the sword or weapon) -3
Reiryoku (Spiritual energy) -5
Kido (Way of the spirit) -5
Hakudo (Physical combat) -5
Hankou (Resistance) -5
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PostSubject: Re: Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain)   Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain) Icon_minitimeSun Apr 15, 2012 10:07 pm

Inner world appearance and Shikai appearance need to be describe in words, I'd recommend putting some kind of limitation on the regen of the armor as well.
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PostSubject: Re: Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain)   Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain) Icon_minitimeSun Apr 15, 2012 10:13 pm

Also, healing techniques cannot be used during a fight.
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PostSubject: Re: Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain)   Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain) Icon_minitimeSun Apr 15, 2012 10:34 pm

alright fixed it up abit the heal takes time and wont be used during a fight also fixed the inner world thing
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PostSubject: Re: Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain)   Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain) Icon_minitimeSun Apr 15, 2012 10:37 pm

Still need to describe the shikai appearance and place a limit on the regen of the armor.
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PostSubject: Re: Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain)   Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain) Icon_minitimeSun Apr 15, 2012 10:42 pm

is three posts enough of a limit ? Also added the description
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PostSubject: Re: Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain)   Mou Tsukomi (soul reaper captain) Icon_minitimeSun Apr 15, 2012 10:46 pm

Alright approved.
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