Zander Satoru (Visored)

Subject: Zander Satoru (Visored) Thu Mar 01, 2012 5:19 pm

*Name: Zander Satoru

Nickname: None

*Age: before death-22 After death-75

*Gender: Male

Division: 12th

Rank: Captain

Weapons: (besides zanpakuto) none

*Personality: Zander is the methodical type and looks at a situation before making his decisions. He has been known to overrun his mouth and get cocky when in the midst of battle when he has the advantage. He is timid around others that are suppose to be his allies and acts carefree to avoid to much confrontation. He is a hard worker which is why is either found in the library area or in some kind of training

*Physical Appearance: Stands 5'8 with dirty blonde hair cut into a buzz cut and baby blue eyes. He has an average build and weighs close to 200 pounds. For clothing he wears a pocket t-shirt, baggy black jeans, steel toed boots, and a black duster like jacket with an extended tail that stops just above his ankles.

*Bio: Zander was the 12th division captain before that night. He was out on a stroll his nose into the latest novel he had picked up, as the moon shine down from its perch above Zander happened to hear a noise nearby. Looking up from his and lowering his left hand which had the book in it he looks around lazily. Not seeing anything inconspicuous He puts the book in his inside jacket pocket, Listening contently he followed the sounds and watched as two shigami fought it out but realized that there was something strange about these two people. After carefully binding them he took them secretly to the 12ths labs and ran test to attempt to learn from them. After weeks of studying and sparring with them and coming so close to perfecting his own hollow mask he was found out the gotei 13 and before he could be banished he took the two other Shigami and disappered without a trace. Unknown to the shigami world Zander took refuge in the human world where he continued training.

Zanpakutou Profile

Zanpakutou Name :Tierra Vengador (Earths Avenger)

Sealed Appearance:The blade is a katana with a 5ft blade made of a smelted mixture of iron, and silver. The handle is 2ft long and has the design of a flower carved neatly into the handle. At the bottom is 30ft worth of chain, unless throwing the zankpakutou the chain is coiled into a holster worn on Zander's left hip.

Spirit Manifestion: A golem made from the Earth can takes the form of a man who has the resemblance of Uryu’s old master; a middle aged man ranging in the age of 40-45 standing 5'9 muscular build varies scars showing down his arm from previous battles.

Elemental Properties: Earth

Shikai

Shikai Release Command: Feel the bite of the Land!
Shikai Released Appearance: On one of the flat sides of the zanpakutou there is a handle for close range defense and the chain in case its thrown.
Spoiler: click to show

Overall Shikai Strength:The weapon can be used for both a close and far attacks. Also the design of the blade makes it harder for a full frontal assault against the wielder.

Overall Shikai Weakness:When thrown the wielder will be left briefly with only the chain to defend with. The wielder must also find a way to get to the weapon before the opponent can attempt a strike.

Abilities

Passive Ability # 1: Armor of Clay!
Strength: Covers Zander in light armor made of earth. This makes for both offensive and defensive. It covers up his body with a fairly durable armor and it makes some of his hand to hand combat more effective as well because the actual armor can hit the opponent.
Weakness: Water can make the actual armor soften quite a lot. It can be broken by many attacks. Mostly used to deplete the damage.
Spoiler: click to show

Active Ability #1: Underground Tunneling
Strength :This ability allows Zander to move almost undected underground like a mole by using his zanpakutou as a rotor blade
Weakness: The ground that Zander moves with his zanpakuto is thrown back at him temporary blinding him. Air is limited so Uryu can only use short distances

Active Ability #2: Earth Spike!
Strength: By stabbing his Zanpakutou into the ground and stating "Earth Spike" a stalagmite shoots up out of the ground, in hopes to possibly impale the opponent. The opponent must be within 2 meters diameter to him.
Weakness: Opponent has to be fairly close. Also, the stalagmite is only 3 feet in diameter and a meter high. Thus, the actual attack can be easy to dodge as it does not have a high range.

Active Ability #3: Meteor!
Strength: By pointing shikai towards the ground, Zander can scream "Meteor" and a large circle of earth can be taken from the ground and float. (This is about 4 feet in diameter.) The user can direct the piece of earth with his shikai, using it to throw it at an opponent with high velocity.
Weakness: User can only direct in in straight paths; thus, can not follow opponent. Furthermore, the user most throw the circle of earth immediately after activation, making it a bit difficult to aim.

Bankai Name: Natus De Terra

Spirit Appearance: Takes the form of an elf (imagine Legolas of Lord of the Rings)

Bankai Appearance: twin katanas with a 5ft blade made of a smelted mixture of iron, and silver. The handle is 2ft long and has the design of a flower carved neatly into the handles

Bankai Abilities:

Ability 1 - Creates vines with jagged edges that shoot from the ground and try to pierce the opponents body or wrap around him

Ability 2 -Creates ten foot diameter pillars that has a one inch gap between them, Then flower pedals made of 10ft thick Earth begin to rise and if they succeed in forming the flower it would proceed to drain them of there energy till the flower blooms in which case the have three post before energy is back.

Bad side is that this will also replenish some energy making them a little less tired

Hollow Profile:

Hollow Name: Huyruu

Hollow Appearance: is basically the same as his original appearance .

Mask Appearance:Is a total white mask that covers all of his face from the center of each eye at the top of the mask to mid cheek on either side is black crescent moons and in the middle of the forehead is a blood red star

Mask Abilities

Augmentation 1 - Speed

Augmentation 2 - Power/Strength

Ability 1 -Custom Cero- Zander will charge his cero off the tip of his index finger. If it hits the ground it will of course create the usual crater but in contrast from that crater a mountain of earth will rise becomeing twenty five feet in diameter

* Hoho (Speed) 4
* Zanjutsu (Art of the sword) 4
* Reiryoku (Spiritual Energy) 4
* Kido (Way of the spirit) 4
* Hakudo (physical combat) 1
* Hankou (Resistance) - 4

Subject: Re: Zander Satoru (Visored) Thu Mar 01, 2012 5:23 pm

You need to follow the template. And you can only have 4 abilties in shikai. also, you describe in words here, not pictures or links. If you want to be a visored, this needs a lot more description.

Subject: Re: Zander Satoru (Visored) Thu Mar 01, 2012 5:24 pm

So Hearse, just a heads up as you continue working on your profile, please put the race in the topic name and maybe add [WIP] (Work in progress) on the topic name as well, just to we moderators know when your done. Helps so we don't have to guess when your finished.

Subject: Re: Zander Satoru (Visored) Wed Apr 18, 2012 6:33 pm

This profile was not approved yet was used. Hearse get's a warning. Make sure to follow the rules to the best of your ability. Thank you.

Please just generally add more description to all the abilities. They are not very understandable.

Subject: Re: Zander Satoru (Visored) Wed Apr 18, 2012 6:34 pm

Hash approved it in OCC Chatroom NYC

Subject: Re: Zander Satoru (Visored) Wed Apr 18, 2012 6:36 pm

>.> disregard the warning then and proceed. Though, I do recommend you clarify these abilites so if you are in a battle and decide to use them, there will be no confusion. Since this profile is already approved, if you do take my advice, you will have to ask for permission for the modifications in the profile modifications topic.

Subject: Re: Zander Satoru (Visored) Sat Apr 21, 2012 1:56 am

Actually Ncy you were right to warn him, seeing as his stats for a C rank are a total of twenty five...

Please fix this, you will not be allowed to RP as this character until it's fixed.

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