Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)

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This is where you post your role-play sample to become a captain, Espada, or sin; obtain a visored or canon character, or obtain a bankai. You can only try out for one character at a time.

The RP sample can have any kind of setting, situation, or character. If you're trying out for a canon character, you must use the character you are trying out for in the sample.

There is no specfied length that it has to be, as quality is more important than quantity, but the longer it is, the better.

Post your sample in this topic and wait to be approved or disapproved. If you are disapproved, you cannot tryout again for a week. There are no third chances.

Really >.< Freaking sweet thanks

No prob. ^^

It was one day in the seireitei. Seth had been looking for his captain for a long time. He had never met his captain so he would not know her if he saw her. He searched everywhere in the seireitei. After a while he got worried. He did not want to find out his caprtain was dead. He was frantic but hid the panic with a level headed expression. He was going through the records of the seireitei library. He had been searching for any clues of the wereabouts of his captain. His long silver hair was a mess since he was running everywhere to find her. He went to the head captain and asked were his captain went to. Thats when the bad news was given. His captain was in hueco mundo. He requested the opening of the senkaimon once more. He was granted it but on one condition. He was to bring back the captain and scout out los noches. The head captain was concerned about the silence that the espada and dalaga had given them. Seth knew it would be dangerous but he accepted it. A hell butterfly was now hovering over him that came from the ceiling. Making his way to the senkaimon gate he waited. Given the signal via hell butterfly the research and development lab opened the gate. With a sigh he braced himself for what to expect. Walking into the gate he would make his way to the human world to meet up with urahara.

Arriving at the human world minutes later seth walked out of the gate and looked around. He knew where the shop was so he wasted no time in getting there. He arrived at the shop to find the almost creepy ex captain there. With the usual greeting urahara welcomed seth inside. After explaining what had happened the ex captain was no longer being funny or childish. He guided seth to the training area where the mimic garganta was waiting for him. Urahara took the hell butter fly from seth and modified it so he could communicate with the shop while inside the portal and the hollowed land. Seth took back the butterfly as it was now inside a reishi orb. Putting the orb in his jacket pocket he made his way into the garganta. With that he starts his risky journy to the territory of the espada and hollows. Traversing the confusing path made by his reiatsu he made sure to keep it steady. Being told the path would be made if his energy he had to focus. Within 20 minutes seth found the exit of the tunnel and found himself inside the desert of hueco mundo.

Seth was given 5 hours to get the captain and scout the area before the portal would open for seth to come back. Wasting little time he made his way through the endless desert. His fierce look and the fact he had made his reiatsu and spiritual pressure low he only met up with a few minor hollows that only ran from the intimidating man. He traveled the white sands as he found his way finally. He had his zanpaktou zinaida out The twin blades were ibn a reverse grip style. Getting closer to the castle he had been ambushed by the 3rd espada. He was taken by suprise and was knocked out. The espada picked him up and carried him with his zanpaktou to the castle. Sonidoing straight into the castle. With a silent espressiion the espada put seth on the floor infront of the lords throne. She sheathed seths swords in the sheath. Bowwing to the lord she sonidoed out of the room. The one known as dalaga could feel the desire for power radianting off of seth as the espada lord got up. With soft footsteps the man kneeled next to seth and examined him, With a slight grin he summoned the 1st espada and requested a hollow blade worm. The woman bowwed and sonidoed out of the room. The espada lord waited as he made sure seth would end up staying unconsious until it was too late. Minutes later the espada appeared and handed the espada lord the worm. With a grin. Placing the worm on seth it crawled into seths mouth and fized with him. Seth was then forced away as he pused everyone away as he was screaming in pain. White fluid was pouring out of his mouth as he gripped his secondary sword and swung at the espada catching her offguard. Making a cut seth was unable to fight as he had to kneel down from the pain. He was out of control as the white fluid turned black. It was slowly making a mask around his face as he was fighting to break free. He sensed the captain nearby and shunpoed.Appearing in a prison cell seth took the captain by suprise. She saw it was seth but he had been infected with hollow powers. Seth did not care. As the mask was still fluid he took the captain and he shunpoed them both out of the cell and he took off with the captain being taken by the waist. He went to the location of the garganta. What was waiting for him was the 6th espada. Seth was losing coniousness as he put down the captain. He charged at the espada. With his weaked state he was only able to get one hit in and it was a slash across the chest before he blacked out. Falling too the ground the black hollow mask fully formed but was also semi liquid. He had been out cold for over 5 hours. When he woke up the captain was gone and the hell butterfly was missing from his jacket. He knew right away he was left for dead. Seth got up as he touched his face and the mask was gone. Thinking the hollow left him he began to think of what to do. He had no way out of the world. Out of a nearby cave a red cero shot out and the light made seth quickly jump out of the way. Drawing his sword he looked at the cave. Out of the cave the espada that attacked him earlier was coming out. Thinking the espada took the captain back he was about to make a run for it."Don't bother that captaiin of yours abandoned you and escaped through the garganta that appeared while you were out....The espada lord requests your pressence."Seth was shocked and enraged. He drew his swords and attacked him. The esapda grinned as he drew his sword and attacked as well. Fighting seth was feeling strange as he had been feeling like he was different. Each time he attacked he made the esapda slide back from the power of his attacks. The espada pushed esth back and slashed seth on the chest causing him to wince in pain. Seth felt dizzy The espada took the chance and fired a gran rey cero at seth hitting him in back. The attack caused seth to black out. This time his body had smoke coming off of his body. The espada figured seth to be dead so he was going in for a swung to make sure sethw as really dead. Out of nowhere seths hand shot up and caught the blade. The espada froze as seths head lifted from the hung position showing he had hollow eyes and a partial black hollow mask on his right side of his face. With grin seth swung and made a deep cut into the espada's stomach. Pulling away the espada. The man with the black hair looked at seth as he was looking very demonic. The blood on seths body vanished but the cuts were still there. The espada growled and went ressurection form. Charging the espada looked like he was pushin seth back putting him on the defensive. That changed when seth went shikai. The strength of his shikai doubled as he was swunging the saber rapidly causing the espada to try and dodge only to get cut every two swings. Out of nowhere seth rammed the esapda with the butt of his gun and then fired three rounds through him. The espada was forced to retreat after fireing a cero and making a cloud of sand to cover seth's vision. The crazed shinigami created a garganta and went inside of it.

A garganta appeared in the rukon district and seth came walking out of it. The partail hollow mask shattered as seth regained control. The shikai state returned to sealed as seth fell to the ground. Covred in injuries as the garganta closed. Seth escaped the sands of hueco mundo with a malicious passenger.

i did my best and i know if i dont get it well at least i know i did my best and really thats all that matters. ^_^ Hope its to your liking mugetsu and to all that read it

You are approved for visored. ^_^

Trying out for Rangiku~ >o>

"Hnnnnnn..." Sunlight streamed into light blue eyes that squinted it out, looking hazily elsewhere. Rangiku raised her hand to cover her eyes along with massage her temples, being hit with a full on headache. It was likely the hangover result of a night's worth of drinking she had accomplished in just the early hours of the day when she decided that paperwork could wait an hour or two or eight. That was in the morning though and based on the ammount of sunlight filling the room, she could guess it was well past noon but she didn't have it in her to complain about basically passing out for a few hours.

Slowly she sat up from her slouched position in her seat, still keeping her eyes covered mostly, leaving just a crack between long fingers so she could see. To help her further make her way through her office she held out her hand to feel around, finding it still firmly grasping a half empty bottle of sake. "Well How bout that...Theres some left" she mumbled in obervation, shrugging her shoulders before tipping her head back and taking a few more sips of the alcoholic beverage."Ahhh" A soft, relaxed sigh escaped her lips as she let both her hands fall to her sides. She leaned forward to set the bottle down by the others that she had emptied along with the help of some squad members she had offered cups to as they passed by. Once done she reached up to her robes, adjusting it so the chance of completely falling out of it was less likely though the amount of cleavage she allowed to remain showing was enough to make any man blush. Standing up straight once more she finished her journey to the window, squinting her eyes again so long dark lashes could black out some of the sunlight and the effects it had on her hangover. She lowered the blinds to the wondow, letting out a sigh and showing pride in her work on her face in a relieved smile.

When she turned around, Rangiku spotted the neglected stack of papers, her full lips now taking on a pout. It was at the same moment she heard footsteps outside along with male voices. 'Perfect' she inwardly smiled malisciously, making a plan on just how that paper work would get done. Perhaps a bit to quickly she rushed over to her desk, having to stop and lean prop herself up on it as she waited a rush of dizziness to pass. She couldn't wait long though as she heard those voices get closer, knowing it wouldn't be long before they passed her office up completely and she lost her chance. Without wasting anymore time, Rangiku picked up the papers, heading straight to the door to her office. The moment she slid it open and stepped out three men had reached the door and walked right into. The papers flew into the air, with a bit of help from the woman holding them, scattering all over the floor.

"Oh no" she sighed out, bringing her hands up to cup her cheeks while her face took pn a defeated expression. Her elbows moved together slightly, innitiating her plan as she accentuated her large womanly features, hearing small gasps from the men who were more than obviously looking there. Rangiku sunk down to her knees, leaning forward which caused waves of blonde hair to fall over her shoulder, framing around the edges of her clothes that showed off everthing they needed to.

"Man, there's no way I can get all of this done" she feigned being worried perfectly, clasping what papers she had picked up and bringing them up to her chest. She raised her heads, eyes big and lightly brimming with dampness as she looked up to the men and their staring blushing faces. Evverything was going just wonderfully.

"You know...er...we could help you out with it" one of them offered and the other two just nodded as if to agree that they would help the lieutenant with the dozens of papers spread out over the hall.
"Really?" she asked in a faked surprised tone and again they nodded. "Well thanks!" Rangiku shot up to her feet, extending her hands out happily to the man who had spoken, shoving the papers into his hand. "I'm counting on you boys~" Any signs of her pevious sorrow were gone as she bounded back in the confines of her office, blowing a kiss before waving and quickly slamming the door shut, leaving behind the three dumbfounded males to do her work.

--I think I got her down to some extent o.o maybe O.o i could just be delusional and biased >o>

LOL Just watch out for typo's. I'm sure Mugetsu would approve this though so,

typos haunt me >.< i shall call ghostbusters on them though o.o

Agreed lol Ghostbusters save lives Just so you know she will be rank C. I'll add her to the list of canon's know so you'll have to distribute her stats in the canon stat's topic.

((OOC: I know that the position was once taken...but I believe that the spot has been opened recently? If not...I will just have to suffice to something lower, if that IS the case.))


In the world of Shinigami, many believed that there was no time for rest and that the duty of a Soul Reaper was one of the most important jobs in the world. A captain, a ruler of their squad and master of their techniques, was one who was held in such high respects of most of their underlings. One who, when asked to jump by, were told to jump. It seemed that also once one became a captain for the Shinigami squads’, life would become easy and relaxing, though neither really struck true to the truth. Takeshi Kage, a master of the sword and shadows, believed that one should find balance somewhere between the two, which explained the very reason he had found a hideaway far from his duties of Captain. The sky far above seemed so pristine and calm, the white almost pearl colored clouds passed overhead as his body laid across the roof of their squad’s barracks. It was almost bizarre to see a Captain of such standards as Takeshi slacking in such a matter and he almost stood out as a…oddity. Though, since a young age, the young master had always been an odd ball with the other children.

The Captain’s cloak was folded nicely in a nice pile to his right with his Zanpakuto, Kage no Akuma, laid across the clothing with obvious care. Takeshi, acting as if he had not a care for the world, lifted a single leg and rest its ankle on the knee of his other which was lifted up for support. Both arms where wrapped into a single appendage behind the back of his head. His red eyes darted back and forth from cloud to cloud, examining the scenery and attempting to deceiver any images in the great canvas in the sky. None were forming just to what Takeshi perceived which caused a sort of depressing sigh to exhale from underneath his breath.

His beautiful white hair was lazily strewn about which represented a certain level of care that the Captain had given for his person appearance. What was the point of such trivial matters? He was the Captain of the second squad, one that was famous and well-known for their immense skill in stealth and never being seen. No-one would not look his way…nor have they ever. Throughout life, he had always been stuck behind the scenes. From beside him, the low-dull toned speaking patterns of his Zanpakuto, the one who was chosen as his life partner, could be heard.

“Takeshi, boy, you should do something about this…boredom.”

His top lip quivered for a moment at the sound of his swords voice before another sigh, out of sheer exhaustion, escaped his mouth. “I am not bored…I simply just feel like being lazy.”

“You are bored from having nothing to do…” The spirit replied.

The same what sarcastic and ‘know-it-all’ tone towards his response made Takeshi grunt in dissatisfaction while his head turned away from his sword, his teeth biting his bottom lip in disgust. “I have nothing to do because no-one has asked me to do anything… It’s been like this for the past month! I guess they just…frown upon someone being so, young, being a Captain.”

Though that was not necessarily true, Takeshi had grown a certain opinion about the other Captains and his very own squad mates about their peer and Captain. For some reason, unexplainable by both his own mind and the mind of his Zanpakuto, caused the feeling of friction to build inside his own heart. Torn between solitude and friends was just…hard. For the time that Takeshi had been alone he had grown stronger, always been happy but always lacking something in his being which even Kage no Akuma could not fill.

“Come on, Takeshi, do not feel so depressed. You know I can feel the same things you do and this emotion is…unacceptable. Let us be off, perhaps train some. That always manages to cheer you up some way.” Kage no Akuma said, feeling the intense pressures radiating off of the young Captain.

“You are right…but let us wait for nightfall.” Takeshi replied before closing his eyes and drifting off into sleep…


“Again! WITH FEELING TAKESHI!”
The yelling from Kage no Akuma was just one of the many objects causing irritation to form and grind at Takeshi entire being. Though the pair stood, one held strongly in the other’s hands and the other standing firm on the ground, before them was a field that stood in almost complete dismay. The grass of the field torn to shreds and the trees, uplifted and rooted from their homes in the ground as the Moon provided the only light source for miles.

“Let us do it again…you may be a Captain, but I feel that your Bankai lacks STRENGTH! We cannot have such weakness; we must prove ourselves to become recognized by the others!” Kage no Akuma spoke again with a certain commanding voice. Takeshi, with sweat already making trails down the sides of his face and arms, sucked up the rising pain in his chest as the two of them went at it again.

“Kage no Akuma…I allow the to strike from thy foes from darkness!” Running a hand over the sword’s smooth, cold surface its exterior and interior changed drastically, becoming as dark as the night while prongs of terrifying proportions sprouted from its length. The handle did the same as the blade, becoming dark enough to hide the entire sword within the night sky, as Takeshi’s hand was prodded by sharp spikes, the sword taking its sacrifice for the exchange of power. Blood, warm and sticky, become like raindrops on a cloudy day, dripping down onto the surface of the field that lay before the both of them.

“…now, boy, go!”

Closing his eyes to concentrate his mind away from the immense amounts of pain growing in his hands, he felt the two of them becoming one, as the sword seeped its way into Takeshi’s hand as if it was digging underneath the skin. It burrowed, becoming one with Takeshi, as black veins began spreading like a disease across his body. Soon it transformed…and his body had obtained the highest level of power, the Bankai. His body, becoming one with the shadows, allowed agility, speed and stealth like no other.

Suddenly, as if from no-where, Takeshi coughed harshly as if something had gone horribly wrong, blood splatters covering his shadowed hand. “Kage no Akuma…it’s going wrong again! It hurts…I can’t.”

“NO! Continue! NOW!” The spirit screamed as he pushed his soul mate on harder.

Takeshi pushed on, ignoring the pain that grew within his torso, using the abilities of his Bankai to jump from shadow to shadow in almost a flash. The Bankai…the most insanely powerful form of any Captain, the very same that was only to be used in case of an emergency. One that Takeshi had mastered, had grown weak to its tribute, and now suffered for it. Time to time his body would manifest to the world around them, striking out as the shadows would materialize and become solid, striking at various trees and spots across the field, the harsh training continuing to go on throughout the night.

You're approved. Your character will be A rank. After you check out the RP system abd make your profile, you'll need to make your squad barracks and captain's office. ^^

Why thank and will do! ...as soon as I awaken from my all-nighter coma sleep. @.@ GOODNIGHT!

Haha, sweet dreams. xD

Bankai Tryout for Lieutenant (I tried my best but no one knew how it was suppose to go so I went off instinct you could say)

The world before Danime was cold. Barren, Dark. Shinigami fighting hollows, hollows fighting shinigami, it was just all too much, too fast. Danime had just came in the war after traveling from far away on a seperate mission. His eyes were filled with worry and his heart leaked with fury. He looked around the war zone and all he could see from miles on ends was blood and bodies. It was like a slaughter house for the dead. Something more grotesque than one would have thought. Quickly turning his head away from the scene in shame Danime refocused his attention on a few seated officers who seemed to have time on their hands. Rushing over to where they were he asked if they had any idea where his captain might have been. They all had the same reply, "No," and then they went and moved back on to the fight that would only cause more fights in the future. Danime saw his fellow shinigami being hurt and injured. He just couldn't let them be abused anymore, his captain was just going to have to wait. Releasing his zanpakuto's seal the rose whip slashed and crashed two incoming hollows who were know where near the strength of a vasto lorde or adjucha not even near the strength of a seated officer. Danime's mind was in dissarray, trying to protect his people, trying to protect himself, trying to look for his captain, trying to save lives, trying to take lives away. Its a mouthful, a headache, its too much, too fast. He didn't know what else he could do. The hollows were multiplying like bunny rabbits and before anyone knew it the number of hollows extinguished by the shinigami's was regained by the hollow forces and doubled in size. Its like all that hard work that the soul reapers put into defeating the hollows was for nothing. Was all hope lost. Danime started to run around looking for his captain. It was then when he was stopped in his tracks by a hollow. The spiritual energy was nothing to turn your nose up about so he decided to not underestimate his foe. Looking deeply into the eyes of the enemy danime used his bakai. A move he had sworn he would never use no matter what the situation, because it begins to corrupt his soul and take him over. Rose petals scattered all across the field in colors of blac and white as a giant black and white petalled rose more larger than an elephant stood tall. It slowly opened and inside was a half naked Danime. This was his bankai. He was half naked because from the waist up is the only thing that could be seen in this bankai. The waist down however is the steem and the rose itself. It is apart of alaricks body now. And now that he was in his bankai things were bound to go one of three directions. Hollows win. Shinigamis win. No one wins.

Approved, but your character will still be a C rank.

Arigato and I know ^^

Hey, I'm gonna try out for the Squad 4 Lieutenant.


Hotaru Fujioka moved from room to room, healing where needed and talking where wanted. One thing she noticed with a lot of the patients was that, though they had visitors while they recovered, a lot of the nurses simply did their duties then left and that seemed to make the patients seem quite lonely.
For that reason, Hotaru made sure to have a short talk with as many of her patients as she could and it would make it worth it to see the small smiles they gave her when she came to check them over.

She had just finished her rounds and was quietly eating the rice balls she had made to replenish her Reiatsu a little, since one of the patients had tried to discharge themselves and had hurt themselves worse in the process, when a heavily bleeding man was brought in.
He was leaning on a shorter woman and seemed to be barely conscious. Calling for some support, Hotaru watched as the man was settled onto a stretcher and brought into one of the emergency treatment rooms. Holding the woman, who was moving to follow her partner into the treatment room, Hotaru touched one of the unseated squad members on the shoulder, telling the man "clear the blood from his body and get the extent his wounds. Start treating him, I'll be there in a moment" The man nodded and walked quickly into the treatment room while Hotaru quickly set about calming down the woman who came in with the patient "now, please, tell me what happened?"

The woman, whom Hotaru quickly learned was named Mayako, told Hotaru that her the man she came in with, her older brother Koji, and herself had been with a larger group of unseated Shinigami who had been sent to kill hollows in the human world when a group of Menos had appeared. there had been more who escaped but they were tracked by hollows and picked off. Mayako had been able to open a Senkaimon for the group but they were picked off as they guided the heavily wounded into it and only a few managed to get away. Two had died of poison and one had bled to death from his wounds.

Entering the treatment room, Hotaru pulled on a pair of healers gloves and made sure her braids were out of the way before walking over to the injured man and unsheathing her Zanpakuto. The other healers knew better than to get in the way of Hyaku iyashi no hana's sikai and either moved to the back of the room or out of the room completely.
Holding Hyaku iyashi no hana completely vertical, Hotaru said "glow softly, Hyaku iyashi no hana" and watched as the Zanpakuto seemed to shiver before beginning to glow and melt into a pool of liquid which floated around five centimeters off Hotaru's cupped hands. The liquid re-formed into a cone shape with a spherical bottom and Hotaru could feel a few new healers watching, interested, as the shape opened into a light green flower with dark yellow arrows pointing away from a white center and down the outwards curling petals. As the Zanpakuto changed, a dense sphere of light yellow energy formed with a two meter radius around the flower, which was the center of Hyaku iyashi no hana's shikai.

Hyaku iyashi no hana immediately set to work, finding the worst injuries and starting the healing process there while giving an inventory of injuries to Hotaru "there is a very deep cut on the patients right thigh which has nicked the right femoral artery and a through-and-through stab wound which has punctured the liver and caused a large amount of internal bleeding which I have already started healing. The right tibia is broken and needs to be set, seven broken ribs in total, three on the left and four on the right, a crack to the left side of the collarbone, and cranial damage as well as severe bruising and smaller cuts to around 70% of his body. His Reiatsu is also almost completely gone"
Hotaru placed the floating flower, which was now slowly spinning, over the mans heart and beckoned two of the more experienced healers as well as one of the less experienced healers, who was laden with rolls of bandage and jars of salve, forward and into the bubble of energy.

The two experienced healers waited only for Hotaru to touch the energy bubble, once for each of the healers, before entering but third, a young woman fresh out of the academy who had obviously heard stories of people denied entry by Hyaku iyashi no hana, hesitated until Hotaru reached through the barrier and offered her a hand and a small smile.
The woman made a scared face as she entered the dense sphere of energy but once she found that she wasn't going to be forcefully repelled by Hyaku iyashi no hana she smiled and bowed to Hotaru before quickly moving into place and beginning the healing process along with the others. Hotaru took her place behind the mans head, directing Hyaku iyashi no hana and giving help to the others where needed while also working on the patients cranial damage.

It was a little over an hour before the need for Hyaku iyashi no hana's shikai was gone and the three other healers nodded to Hotaru before leaving the room to go have something to eat and replenish their Reiatsu a little.
The mans smaller wounds had been healed completely and his deeper wounds had been bandaged, his breaks and his cranial damage had been healed and his Reiatsu had been almost completely replenished but he had been put into a deep sleep so that he could finish healing naturally. Hotaru and another healer moved the man onto a waiting stretcher and moved him from the treatment room into a smaller room where he would be until he was healed enough to leave.

leaving the other healer with her patient, Hotaru walked to the Squad kitchens where she was brought a plate with three rice balls and a kettle full of fragrant green tea and left to her own devices as she began filling in the report of her latest patients treatment.

Hate to tell you this, after you typed all this out, but you don't need to try out to be a lieutenant, you just ask the captain of the squad.

Mugetsu wrote:

Hate to tell you this, after you typed all this out, but you don't need to try out to be a lieutenant, you just ask the captain of the squad.

...seriously...

*head-desk* brilliant ><'

Sorry. xD Just read the topic beginning next time. o.o

*on one cold dark night deep within the forest that resided far east off of the beaten track of karakura town stood a 8ft tall white circular door which seemed to form into a japanese styled door which was known as a senkimon. it slowly crept open as a lone pressence begun to exit the senkimon, the pressence had the stature of a teenage kid appearing to be about 13, he seemed to weigh around 155 lbs with a slim athletic build, his hair as dark as the night sky and long in a pulled back style, his irisis glowing with a light turquiose color. he wore a traditional shinigami shihakusho that seemed to fit him quite baggy and blew in the wind as he unsheathed his zanpaktuo, this lone warrior was known to be the forth seat to squad 11 his name was jin kaname. he usually came to the world of the living to train in secret since he didnt want no one to know about his bankai training as it would resolve badly. As jin unsheath his zanpaktuo his spiritual pressure seemed to rise dramaticly then he placed his zanpaktuo out foreward infront of himself, as he did this a dark blue aura seemed to surround him and cause the trees to shake and bend violently, then after his preparation one powerful word escaped his lips*

"bankai!"

*after a few seconds of speaking violent winds begun blowing as dust covered the forest obsuring the view of forest animals which inhabited the area, then a dense barrier seemed to take the land as dense reiastu made the gravity of the forest abit heavier. then within the choas a single chime was heard through out the forest as the dust and dense reiastu disappeared, then jin seemed to take a differant appearance, his height seemed to raise up by one inch and his attire changed as well as he had a black cloak hanging over his shoulder in a vertical position. his zanpaktuo as well took a new appearance, the hilt had a black decoration color and white diamond formation, there was no tsuba but it was in a U shape formation with two moon crystals, the blade was 6ft long and silver with a black outline with a crystal line meter at the centre*

"finally...i used my bankai without exhaugsting my spiritual pressure, thats a first"

*jin was filled with pride as he finally successfully used his bankai without passing out or over using his spiritual pressure, he then wanted to test his new power so he reached into his pocket and grabbed a golden coin from his pocket and raised it high and spoke*

"good thing i took this hollow bait from that damn quincy"

*jin placed his thumb under the coin and flipped it into the air, he then raised his zanpaktuo upwards as the coin hit the floor jin struck the centre of the coin which cracked it then disappeared, jin was confused since nothing was happening then suddenly a crack in the sky above jin formed until it broke open. then a horde of 3 low level hollows poured out screeching and yelling headed towards jin, jin then spun his blade horazontally and waited till the nearest hollow was about a foot away and he struck it with a blow to its chest causing it to decintergrate, jin then shunpo'ed 2ft away from the oncoming horde and once again spun his blade and begun provoking the hollows*

"come on you empty hearted freaks, you can do better then that"

*jin smirked as one hollow ran towards him and cocked back its fist, as it launched foreward jin jumped up and landed on its arm and stabbed the blade into its arm and ran up along it cutting it in half, after cutting the arm in half jin jumped up again and did a backflip and sent a vertical slash towards it back but unfortunely jin was struck in the back by a doom cero blast, then the hollow who had its arm severed jumped up and smash its foot on jin into the ground but as it moved its foot jin wasnt seen, in truth jin was behind the monster with his hand and zanpaktuo raised high within the air. at the tip of jin's blade was a dense ball of reiastu and ice element*

"hana yuki no ju"


*and with one swift movement jin flicked his wrist and pointed the blade tip at the hollow and released it hitting the hollows back which caused it to freeze instantly, then it shattered as jin swung his blade downward releasing yet another attack a freezing cold twister with ice like petals sped towards the other hollow who seemed to flee from the battle but sadly it was caught in the attack and was shredded to bits then frozen*

"that was called petarinjaya yuki, its ashame that i wasted my bankai but oh well"

*jin seemed to be unsatisfied with the results of the battle seeing he couldnt use his full potential but atleast he used it successfully which made him atleast proud, he then reverted back to normal and stabbed the air as his blade seemed to fade away, then another senkimon opened as jin left the world of the living*

Sorry, Rico. . . according to the grading structure, you did not pass. No structure, massive errors, too much over-exaggeration, etc. I'll give you shikai though, so you can still apply for lieutenant if a captain accepts you. As a lieutenant, you'll be rank C, if you don't get accepted for that, you'll be rank D.

Dravius would enter Menos forest silently, his blood red eyes darting from side to side as he walked. he would wear a white open faced jacket, white baggy jeans, and white shoes. His right hand would be at his left hip where his zanpakuto rests. Hearing a twig snap seven feet to his right Dravius draws his zanpakuto instinctively with his right as he charges a cero in the palm of his left hand.

From the brush rushes three feral adjuchas. Acting swiftly Dravius fires the custom cero a short distance infront of the creatures, and as it hits the ground ice forms in a twenty foot area. As the the adjuchas travel on an a 3 man triangle formation the first one hits the ice and begins to slide. Then Ice shoots up trapping the first in a crystal of light blue ice, the other two try to leap outta the way and the one on left succeds. The one on the right is skewerd in six places on its right side hitting four major organs, and dravius runs using momentum and pure strength shatters the ice crystal and its contents. In doing that time frame the third was forgotten and it jumps at dravius pinning him against a nearby tree as it uses its claws on Dravius' right side.

Using his zanpakuto hilt Dravius rams it into the adjucha's mid-section causing it to back up three steps as they both gasp for air. Looking at each other murderously Dravius unleashes his resurrection and Dravius' body is covered in heavy plated scales. Using his left arm he grabs the adjucha by the front and flings him against a nearby tree, hard so to knock the tree over then as the creature goes to get up, on his wrists stingers like a scorpions and Dravius slams his fists into the adjucha's multiple time until blood oozes all over its back and torso. Then Dravius left the forest so his carnage could be veiwed by all.

You don't need to try out for a Lieutenant or a Fraccion ._.

Kizomaru Hotaru wrote:

You don't need to try out for a Lieutenant or a Fraccion ._.

oops thought you did, my bad. Oh well ill try for captain or espada 5 with that then lmao

I don't know if you can really change what you're trying out for one, two that post wasn't good enough in my opinion for either of those positions.